Echo ([info]distant_wisp) wrote,
@ 2008-09-18 08:51:00
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kingdom hearts...
okay, i will grant that sora's story is, esentially, over, theres still more to it, but it will likely be explained in the prequel...this does not necessarily mean there is nothing else to be done, pete is still around, malificent is still around, the heartless and nobodies are still swarming, and there is a power vacume left by the fall of the organization that will eventually be filled...

so, whats your story line, actually somewhat similar to the original one...

the heart...what is the heart...what is the keyblade, i think they are one in the same, the keyblade is an avatar...

what happens when a heart is consumed by darkness? the body becomes a heartless, the mind, if the sense of self is powerful enough, is transmuted into the physical form that is a nobody, or rather no-body...and the heart..thats a question, it indicates that the heart is held in the darkness of the heartless who consumed it, kind of like zombies hunger for brains, the heartless is an empty, hungering vescle longing to have back its heart...when the heartless is destroyed, the implication is that the heart returns to kingdom hearts...

so, the main character here i think, would be a person whos home is attacked by heartless, and is forced to witness not only his friends and family being pulled into the darkness, like sora did, but infact, being devoured by it, as sora witnessed shortly after in traverse town...

finally its down to him, and a few others, cornered on all sides, trying to fight them off with a branch or a pipe or something, which slides through the forms of the heartless like a knife through cold molasses, but he has to fight, the children behind him are too small to defend them selves, if he fails, they pay the price...but too late, they attack, shadow after shadow sweeping down upon him, till all is dark...all is silent

"why is this happening?" "why does anything happen?" comes a voice, a thought..a feeling? "where am i?" "nowhere..nothing..just another child, lost in the darkness..." "lost?...i lost?" "in the darkness...lost...- why.. - you were weak - weak...i lost..i was......NO! I CAN'T LOSE!" *thudump* a small flash in the distance..light? "you still want to fight? - YES!" *thudump, brighter...a pillar, off in the distance, beneath him? drifting ever so slowly down, like alice down the rabit hole.. "why...? - BE...because...i..i have to... - you are weak...no more then a child  - ...i want to be strong...i need...i need..power... - power? why do you deserve power - i...maybe..maybe i dont deserve it...but i need it...i have to be strong, i need power... - ...why?..." the voice having grown steadily louder as he neared the platform, at first barely a whisper, but now almost painful in his ears " because i...i...I HAVE TO PROTECT THEM! - WHO? - EVERYONE!" his body nearly collapses as his feet land hard on the platform, glowing before him, a jewel, floating in the middle of the platform, spinning slowly, in the shape of a heart, tiny, weak, fragile, but the light erupting from it was almost painful... "power to protection..is the power of distruction...dark and terrible...a blade to split the heart of all worlds, the greatest power of all...is this truly the power you seek, little boy? - Y...yes..I..." was it just him? or in this small moment of doubt, did the crystaline heart seem to grow even smaller?..no..no time for doubt...no time for hesitation "YES! I WANT POWER, I DONT CARE IF ITS THE POWER OF DESTRUCTION OR PROTECTION OR WHAT EVER! I WANT POWER!" .....silence... but the crystal was glowing brighter, and swelling larger, and larger, beating? faster, almost thundering "then take my hand, little boy, and together, we shall fight side by side" his hand reached out...as if on its own "who...who are you...-....i am you...i am power...i am the..." as his fingers closed around the glowing crystal, he felt warmth in his chest, flowing into him from the crystal? flowing out of him to the crystal? he didnt know, but as he did, the darkness shattered, not slowly brightening, but more like glass spiderwebbing and crashing around him, the shadowy imps exploded away from him as he felt him self spin on the spot, swinging his fist...the pipe? what just happened? what had he been doing? *hiiisssssss!!* "keeeyblaaade! keeeyblaade keeyblaaaaaaade!" the shadows chanted, and as if in response, the hand holding the pipe...no, not a pipe anymore? what was it? it moved to fast for him to see, began swinging, as if the thing inside it were in control of his body, not his mind, it was like he was dancing more then fighting, the blade slashed and cracked through the shadows, and no longer did it float through them like they were syrup, but instead cast the shadows back, causeing them to burst into smoke and ash, and from each, a glowing crystal heart erupted, and drifted lazily before disapearing..."

(ahem, i know that lacked sentance or paragraph structure, or even the basist gramar acuracy, as well as being horribly mellowdramatic, but i never claimed i could write..)

so, where does it go from here, after slashing through an army of shadows untill the world its self is devoured, and...i hate twilight town so we will say he ends up in traverse town, so much nicer...maybe he manages to keep the kids in tow, maybe not, who knows...but i think once learning about the heartless crisis, and what they do, his quest should be based upon trying to locate the hearts of his friends and loved ones, and figure out how to reunite them with their physical forms...if possible...and maybe finally end in the trajedy that those who have been lost to the heartless cant return... (note, no one it showed in kingdom hearts 2, selphie and all, were actually depicted being devoured by heartless, the world was conected, and compressed into the end of worlds...)

anyway, assuming anyone managed to slog through all that to read this...it would be awesome if you could make your own mmo type spaces on the net, as it would be great to make a traverse town for an online meeting place and chatroom...also if i ever won the big lotto, i would totally build a traverse town...then pay for it by renting it out for anime fantasy and kingdom hearts conventions...though i supose you have to play the lotto to win it...



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[info]deaconhighwind
2008-09-19 06:45 am UTC (link)
I like it. Needs structure, but I like it.

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[info]distant_wisp
2008-09-19 07:12 pm UTC (link)
yay! someone said they like it! and didnt spend an hour pointing out the fact i have no skill points in writing..i count this as a win

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